So I realized I didn't write anything about the rough cut. It pretty much went well after I wrote a paper edit. I thank the class for the feedback they gave me about what to do story wise. Length will come into to play when whatever is pertinent to the story is fine tuned. But generally my main focus was flow and redundancy and choppiness and was the story coming across and was it interesting enough to make people care and feel engaged. Okay so I think that is it for now.
Oh yeah already made an appointment with Nate for color and we have begun clean up and I gave Ben the job of creating name cards.
